Welcome to Revision MBA



Applying to business school?

Now's the time to start working on your applications.

Dr. McEntire will coach you through creating incredible personal essays!




As more applicants compete for limited positions at top graduate and professional schools, demand for the highest quality of applications has risen. Revision MBA is committed to helping advanced-degree applicants compose the most persuasive and compelling personal essays possible at reasonable prices.




Most people only write one or two personal essays in their lives, and they don't have enough information about what makes a personal essay strong. Dr. McEntire has read hundreds of personal essays. She understands the mechanics of a strong personal essay, and she can offer advice from the perspective of admissions committee members. Dr. McEntire is also a master of English language composition and style. Joann Kleinneiur-McEntire, Ph.D., co-authored Top-Law-Schools.com Guide to Personal Statements in 2009. Since then, Dr. McEntire has been studying personal essays for business school intensely, and she is hard at work on a new book about business school personal essays. In the last two years, she has helped MBA applicants gain admission to top B-schools.



The price for private writing coaching on personal essays for business school has skyrocketed in recent years, as candidates will pay thousands of dollars for expert help marketing themselves to top MBA programs. Dr. McEntire, however, shares a different perspective with clients: She believes in making the strongest editing and writing coaching available to all applicants applying to business school. Click here to learn more about Revision MBA.